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Prelude in C

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Did a traditional pencil sketch in class today - Well, I'm not a very good student.
Isn't supposed to be anyone in particularly, but I grew fond of her design. Maybe I'll use her for something in the future.

Done with a traditional graphite 2B pencil and a 2B mechanical pencil.
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1928x1600px 3.03 MB
Make
Canon
Model
MP250 series
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
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niceeeeee sketch. very original and cute haha ^^ the blending is well done and it s very nicely sketched.
however, the layers that are underneath should be a bit more darker (for example right under the girl's face and her hair under her bangs) also a bit more darker around her nose and her skin under her bangs. the shading was done nicely but can be a little better if more smooth. the few strands at the right side is better if it s not curled too much at the bottom, and should be more natural. the white spot on the left eye should be smaller than the right at this angle, but is drawn slightly larger. the eyebrows should not be the same length if it s at an angle, same with her shoulders the left is suppose to be a little lower than the right. lips should be closer to the nose rather than the chin. overall a great sketch, and ideas ^^ better technique can be used tho.